Thread:BenBFF/@comment-24770490-20150625151002/@comment-24770490-20150625152615

I was sure you would pick the one from my list that you clearly know is not the main problem. VisualEditor is not nearly as good as the regular or the source editor. Less experienced users will only make more harm with it.

While you corrected some grammar mistakes, you added new ones as well.

The sections' sizes were random and they did not follow the MoS.

You changed the episode title, so only the first letter is capital which is also not correct.

So overall, while you definitely cleaned some of the page there are plenty mistakes that you added.

Try not take it as a deterrent and improve using those I mentioned.