Thread:Blaziken rjcf/@comment-4495863-20120101192446/@comment-34326521-20120101200740

I'm not a pro, but thanks for the compliment.

I would advise against putting the recent activity on the main page, in order to keep it short, but other than that everything looks fine to me. However, you should use more paragraphs. I didn't try to read your stories (I dislike most fan fictions), but even if I tried, it would be difficult. 