Thread:Scoutpower1/@comment-34326521-20140330193755

I tried to leave you this message a while ago, but Wikia was having some problems. Then you stopped editing. I had hoped it wouldn't be necessary anymore, but apparently it is.

First, stop with the redundant statements. The latest was "Witchcraft and Witchery" in Charmcaster's page. They are the same thing. You wouldn't tell someone that Sonic is "fast and quick", would you? They mean the same thing.

Second, don't put statements like "unusually strong and powerful" or "much, much, much stronger" (might be one "much" too many). Those are fan cruft. Who says they're "unusually" strong? What makes them different from "regularly" strong powers? Why are they "much, much, much stronger" than others?

Third and lastly, the difference between "Appearance" and "Appearances" is clear to anyone who has a basic command of the English language. There's no need to call the "Appearance" section "Physical Appearance". It's redundant. In addition, don't rename the "Powers and Abilities" section "Abilities and Powers". This is contrary to the MoS which, if it didn't exist, still made the change improper, as it is called "Powers and Abilities" throughout the whole wiki. 