Thread:Great Ochoa/@comment-34326521-20150801183217/@comment-34326521-20151013191124

I meant take a short break before reviewing your posts, but only hit "Reply" after you've had a chance to review them.

There's really only one thing you need to fix: excessive repetition. You say the same thing in multiple ways four or five times in a row, turning what should be a couple 2-3 sentence paragraphs into a confusing mess of a post.

As for giving people the chance to fix their mistakes, what makes you think I don't? I gave you a warning in this thread and followed up on it. I do the same with other warnings.